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its been FOUR years and we still haven't gotten an update man
Hey mate. Just keeping you up with typos. It's great so far.
It's alright.
I found a few typographical errors, despite my tiredness.
↑ 'he' shoulf be 'she', I think; and you forgot the word 'room' after 'living'.
↑ There is a word missing here, but I don't know which, 'like' or 'want', between 'don't' and 'you'.
I rather liked it, and hope you continue.
Thanks for pointing those out!
Happy to help~.
Approved, need more.
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its been FOUR years and we still haven't gotten an update man
Hey mate. Just keeping you up with typos. It's great so far.
It's alright.
I found a few typographical errors, despite my tiredness.
↑ 'he' shoulf be 'she', I think; and you forgot the word 'room' after 'living'.
↑ There is a word missing here, but I don't know which, 'like' or 'want', between 'don't' and 'you'.
I rather liked it, and hope you continue.
Thanks for pointing those out!
Happy to help~.
Approved, need more.
Text based trash